Sister Talk under the Covers

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 8 Comments

Certainly as an actor, half of your work is not going to end up on the screen anyway, because in the editorial process, they need to cut to the other actor in the scene. Very often, your best work ends up on the cutting room floor, because it just doesn’t work with the overall narrative drive of the story. ~Hart …

Outtakes from The Song of Sourwood Mountain

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 4 Comments

When writing a book, I, as do all writers, need to keep the focus on the main story and not slide off into side scenes. Sometimes I see these scenes when I’m editing and sometimes my editor points them out. The scenes and paragraphs of extra information aren’t bad, just not necessary to the story. I don’t want a reader …

More Outtakes from When the Meadow Blooms

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 16 Comments

Sienna and Calla were my young sisters in my recent release, When the Meadow Blooms. I always enjoy seeing one of my stories through a child’s or a young person’s eyes. This one was no different. The girls are 9 and 14 at the beginning of the story and Calla is definitely a big sister. She wants to help Sienna …

Outtakes from When the Meadow Blooms

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 8 Comments

Only a couple more weeks until the release of my new book, When the Meadow Blooms. So I thought this would be a good time to share some outakes or scenes cut from the book before it was published. I sometimes tend to be wordier than necessary. I know you all can’t believe that! But some scenes are better without quite as …